Friday, January 29, 2016

Friday, 29 January

Class began with a review of previous essays and comments and feedback provided by Mr. Zarler.

Students then created a Revision-Editing Guide based on their own needs and goals.

Next, students conferenced, including by reading aloud their rough drafts to other students.

Students conferenced with Mr. Zartler and with one another.

Macbeth essays are due NEXT class.

Students should be prepared to return Macbeth at the library, next class, and to check out Night.

Tuesday, January 19, 2016

Tuesday, 19 January, 2016

Class began with a series of short prompts about Macbeth:
One of the most memorable aspects of Macbeth is...
If I had to explain the main idea / moral of the Macbeth in seven sentences I would say ...
Wouldn't it be cool if instead of _________ in Macbeth _______....
It's called Macbeth, but a better title would be __________ because .....

Students were reminded that there would be short test on Macbeth next class.
Students were given the following assignment. Bringing a completed outline for the essay is the main part of their final exam. Students will conference with Mr. Zartler on exam day on the outline:

Macbeth Essay Outline     Due _____________________


You are to turn in an outline for a three (3) page essay for your final exam. Your essay should not summarize Macbeth, but explain the answer to an interesting questions. Several such questions are listed below.

We have frequently discussed “The Chain of Being” as it relates to Macbeth so your paper should address this issue as part of it’s analysis. You must properly embed at least two in your essay.

The best essays will explain (in the conclusion) how James I (VI)’s patronage of Shakespeare might be one reason for these ideas to be in the play.

It would make good sense to follow one key idea in your essay. For example you could write about hallucinations, night, sleep, or blood; all of which are ideas we have spent time discussing and researching in class.

Here are some typical essay prompts; do any of them help you think about what to write?

A) The fantastical and grotesque witches are among the most memorable figures in the play. How does Shakespeare characterize the witches? What is their thematic significance?

B) Discuss the role that blood plays in Macbeth, particularly immediately following Duncan’s murder and late in the play. What does it symbolize for Macbeth and his wife?

C) Choose a word or phrase whose meaning is repeated throughout the play, explain the significance of it’s literal, implied, and metaphorical meanings to the overall theme or message of the play.

D) Discuss Macbeth’s visions and hallucinations. What role do they play in the development of his character?

E) Is Lady Macbeth more responsible than Macbeth for the murder of the King? Is Lady Macbeth a more evil character than her husband and, if so, why?

F) Examine Macbeth's mental deterioration throughout the play.

When writing a literature paper it is important to quote from the book.  When using quotes it is important to follow the pattern of 1) introducing a quote 2) quoting the quote (with citation) 3) explaining the significance of the quote.  All quotes are followed by a parenthetical citation in the abbreviated format (Act. Scene. Line).  Examples are as follow:

The weired sisters immediately set the mood of the play intoning, “Fair is foul, foul is fair,/ Hover through the fog and filthy air” (I. i. 12). Throughout Macbeth things that ought to be good are not, and things that should be evil are embraced.

Note how a / is used to indicate a line break within an “in-line” quote.  For a longer quote use block indent.

When Macbeth begins his final soliloquy the reader is meant to understand the futility of Macbeth’s life based on ambition, greed, and selfishness.  Macbeth says:
Tomorrow and tomorrow and tomorrow
Creeps in this petty pace from day to day
To the last syllable of recorded time, (V. v. 22-25)
The reader is mean to understand that the petty pace is a reference to the unimportance of all worldly actions.

Macbeth’s Fatal Flaw is:


The evidence I’m going to use to prove my thesis is:


I. Introduction (Thesis Statement)
A. Macbeth
B. Tragedy
C. Fatal Flaw
D. Thesis
II. Topic Sentence 1 (Chain of Being?)
            A. What is the chain
            B. How does it relate to this play
III. Topic Sentence 2
A, Introduction to quote
B. Quote
C. Explication of quote
D. Connection of topic sentence to thesis
IV. Second piece of evidence
A. Introduction to quote
B. Quote
C. Explication of quote
D. Connection of topic sentence to thesis
V. Third piece of evidence
A. Introduction to quote
B. Quote
C. Explication of quote
D. Connection of topic sentence to thesis
VI. You may have additional quotes
VII. You may explain actions without quotes
VIII. Conclusion

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II.
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III.
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IV.
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V.
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VI.
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VIII.



Thursday, January 14, 2016

Tuesday / Thursday January 12th and 14th

Class worked through reading and viewing the end of Macbeth.

Mr. Zartler explained that the final exam would be students turning in an outline for an essay on Macbeth (the essay will be due the second week of second semester). There will also be a short test on Macbeth on the day of the final. This test will be comprehension focused and include information on classical tragedy and the Chain of Being.

On Tuesday of next week class will be devoted to developing thesis statements, and beginning work on the outline due for the final.

On Thursday the class discussed (among other things) the following quotes:

Macbeth
Some Significant Passages

Fair is foul, and foul is fair: (Act I, Scene I)



When the battle's lost and won. (Act I, Scene I)



If chance will have me king, why, chance may crown me. (Act I, Scene III)



Nothing in his life
became him like the leaving it; he died
 as one that had been studied in his death
 to throw away the dearest thing he owed,
 as 't were a careless trifle. (Act I, Scene IV)



Yet do I fear thy nature;
It is too full o' the milk of human kindness."(Act I, Scene V)



Look like the innocent flower,
but be the serpent under't. (Act I, Scene V)



I dare do all that may become a man;
Who dares do more is none.(Act I, Scene VII)



I have no spur
to prick the sides of my intent, but only
vaulting ambition, which o'erleaps itself,
and falls on the other. (Act I, Scene VII)




 (Act II, Scene I)



Will all great Neptune's ocean wash this blood
clean from my hand? No, this my hand will rather
the multitudinous seas incarnadine,
making the green one red (Act II, Scene II)



What's done is done. (Act III, Scene II)







 (Act V, Scene I).



 (Act V, Scene I)




 (Act V, Scene VIII)